Recount Writing-Catching Tuna

 WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17.10.2071               

Catching tuna.

On a beautiful night I went to catch tuna with my family

at the creek by the Tarzan swing. When we got there we set some lines and had a kai. I felt excited.

Then we heard a noise coming from the creek. I blazed with the torch to see if it was a tuna. It was a tuna. It was as long as a giraffe's neck. I smacked it with a stick two times on the head. Then we put it in the bag. I felt amazed at myself for catching a big tuna. We caught 4 tuna.

Then we went home to eat them. We put them straight on the fire. They tasted good.

It was an amazing night. I love going to catch tuna.

persuasive writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18.10.2017   

We should do homework every night

I think we should do homework every night.                                                     Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can achieve our goals because we are practising our learning at home.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night so we can get smarter .

Another  reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can give our brain a workout.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night so we can have one by one time with our mum.

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.  

persuasive writing - We should play sport every day

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.                                                   

19.10.2017  

We should play sport every day

I think we should play sport every day.

First I think we should play sport every day because we can get fitter. We can get fit at playing sport.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we can learn how to work together as a team.

Another reason why we should do sport every day is because we can get fresh air.

Lastly I think we should do sport every day because can learn some good skills.

So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.

           

Look at the taonga I made for my Dad.

Happy Father's Day, Dad.

My Father's Day Poster.

Addition Basic Fact practice.

I have been practice my addition basic facts. I wanted to get faster and more accurate. When I started my top score was 27. 
Today I scored 45. Here are my results.   

Recount Writing-Feeding the Pigs.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

Feeding the pigs

On Saturday afternoon I went with my mum and dad to feed the pigs at Awarua. The pigs were very hungry.

My friends came over to stay for the night. We had heaps of fun at my house.

We had a few games of bat down. I got to be the first batter on bat down. I did a big big hit but my dad and mum did the biggest hits like lava coming out of a volcano. I said, “Wow, now that is a big hit mum. Then my brother came out to play but he did the smallest hit. Next it was time to go to Julius's house. At Julius’s house we were playing together. We had a game of rugby. My dad and mum came to play. Julius's dad and mum came and played too. I went for a sub of and I cheered for the people that were playing rugby. It was a very cool day with my family.