Recount writing-In the holidays

We are learning to use show don't tell to spice up our writing.

In the holidays

On Sunday morning me and my family went to the beach at Opononi.

Firstly we brought our go karts and motorbikes and quads to the beach so we could have fun riding our vehicles on the sand. I was drifting on all of the motorcycles. I was racing my mum and dad. My brother was at the back of me on the go karts because there were two seats. When I was riding my go kart I was going super fast. It felt like I was zooming because I was going fast as. When I was riding I was so happy and proud  and I had a huge smile on my face. It was as bright as the sun at the beach. It was a beautiful day.

My brother was yelling, “Yipeee!”
He was so excited he had a huge smile on his face.

My mum and dad said, “This is the best ride ever.”
We all enjoyed our wonderful day.
I said to my dad, “Thank you for taking us to the beach.”
I had a big big as smile on my face. I was giving a high five to the sky.