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Thursday, 18 October 2018

Recount writing - My holiday

                  We are learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount writing
16 . 10 .18
In the holidays it was my cousin Julius’s birthday. On his birthday we went to Rainbows End. Firstly me and my cousin went to the bumper cars. We bumped each other. That was so cool. The first bump I did was at the back of him. After that I started to zoom away from him because he said, "Oh!!!! I'm coming for you now." Then he started to chase me and I nearly crashed so I turned. When I turned he got me and I said, "Nice play Julius." Then I said, "We should go to the roller coaster." He said, "Yes." We went to the roller coaster. When I got on the roller coaster I started to scream. My cousin laughed out loud at me. I said, "Shush." Then we went to my Aunty Breeze and said, "Can we go to McDonalds please?" So my aunty said, "Yes." So we went McDonalds. After that my aunt said, "Let's go home and eat it.".                 

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