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Thursday 19 October 2017

Recount Writing-Catching Tuna

 WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
17.10.2071               
Catching tuna.
On a beautiful night I went to catch tuna with my family
at the creek by the Tarzan swing. When we got there we set some lines and had a kai. I felt excited.
Then we heard a noise coming from the creek. I blazed with the torch to see if it was a tuna. It was a tuna. It was as long as a giraffe's neck. I smacked it with a stick two times on the head. Then we put it in the bag. I felt amazed at myself for catching a big tuna. We caught 4 tuna.
Then we went home to eat them. We put them straight on the fire. They tasted good.

It was an amazing night. I love going to catch tuna.

persuasive writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
18.10.2017   
We should do homework every night
I think we should do homework every night.                                                     Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can achieve our goals because we are practising our learning at home.
Secondly I think we should do homework every night so we can get smarter .
Another  reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can give our brain a workout.
Lastly I think we should do homework every night so we can have one by one time with our mum.

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.  

persuasive writing - We should play sport every day

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.                                                   
19.10.2017  
We should play sport every day
I think we should play sport every day.
First I think we should play sport every day because we can get fitter. We can get fit at playing sport.
Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we can learn how to work together as a team.
Another reason why we should do sport every day is because we can get fresh air.
Lastly I think we should do sport every day because can learn some good skills.
So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.