Recount Writing: At the Market day

I am learning to use the correct structure for recount writing.

At the Market day

On Friday me and my family went to the Market day at school. It was so so cool. Firstly when we got there we went to get our tickets from Whaea Stacey. Then I went to play on the park. When I got to the park I saw Zion. I asked if he wanted to play tag. He said, “Yes.” Then I said, “You're in.” When I ran, I ran as fast as a race car but Zion tagged me. Then some other kids wanted to play. I said yes but when we played Zion was just too fast. The kids that played were Tarihe Whetu, Zion and Armani.

When we finished playing we stopped and then we went to have a drink of L&P. It was so tasty. After that we had a kai. We had a fried bread with chocolate on top and candy floss and a toffee apple. Then me and my family went home.